Tips for Writing an Effective Audio Script
by Jennifer Tribe
When you think of writing, what springs to mind? If you’re
like most people, you think of things like books, essays,
stories, and e-mails. These are all types of writing that are
typically meant to be read. They are written for the eye.
Writing for the ear, on the other hand, means creating words
that people will listen to.
Writing for the ear is different than writing for the eye.
Listeners can’t stop to re-read a sentence to clarify its
meaning. The message has just one shot to get through before
the narrative continues and the thought is left behind. In
order to be grasped quickly, an audio script has to be
crystal clear and very simple.
Audio scriptwriting is not a skill we’re commonly taught,
but whether you are creating tape sets, audio newsletters or
a recorded welcome message for your web site, it pays to
know a few scriptwriting tricks.
Listen to the way people talk in everyday conversation.
We rarely talk as formally as we write. We tend to talk in
short sentences, even sentence fragments. We use
contractions and simple words. Use this style in your
writing, even though it may contradict what you’ve been
taught about ‘proper’ writing. Remember, it doesn’t matter
what it looks like on paper as long as it’s easy for a
listener to understand.
Build a connection. Audio products are a chance to create
a bond with people as they listen to the sound of your
voice. Invite them into your world by using inclusive
language such as 'we' and 'our.'
Keep it short. Convey ideas in short, self-contained
chunks. Use short sentences so that listeners can easily
follow the thread of your words. A good rule of thumb is to
keep sentences under 25 words.
Pay attention to rhythm. Be careful about running
together too many sentences that are all the same length. A
bit of variety will hold a listener’s attention longer.
Use silence. Listeners need time to absorb what you’ve
said. Work pauses into your script by indicating where you
(or your voice talent) will stop for a moment during the
recording. Frequent pauses also make it easy to edit your
audio recordings later since you’ll have clean breaks
between sentences and ideas.
Round off numbers. Instead of mentioning a figure such as
$11,768 say "about $12,000." Round numbers are far easier
for the ear to grasp and understand.
Watch out for words that sound alike. Listeners can’t see
whether you wrote "two" or "too." Make sure the meaning of
your homonyms is clear from the context of your sentence, or
remove them altogether.
Practice reading the script out loud. Do you have to stop
for a breath in the middle of a sentence? The sentence is
too long. Do you repeatedly stumble in your reading when you
get to a certain point in your script? The idea or wording
isn’t clear.
Spend some time listening to radio news broadcasts. Record
and transcribe a few of them, then analyze their structure.
You will begin to notice they use many of these techniques.
Modeling their style will help improve your own audio
scripts.
© 2004-2007 Jennifer Tribe
Jennifer Tribe is a principal at Highspot Inc. Want to self-publish a book, produce an audio program, launch a seminar? Highspot can help transform your great ideas into lasting knowledge products.
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